Go, I am to reclaim you as a song that misfits the memorabilia. A song that rustles through from branch to branch pecking, over and over, at all the blossoms cramming into a gap which has been otherwise declared truly unbridgeable, yet glistening. I once was a place. You have come a long way to hand me a song like that.
To think that you are a song, because a song can open and reopen the wounds of past and passing. And when you cared to roll over those immaculate burns, nothing came out healed. Now the suture does not quite appear as a mere buzz as dead blood threads keep seeping through the parchment. What is it a song, a brooding beak, or an engine blowing smoke, a falsetto of that kind?
You as a song, because a song flows down to read the retreat address over and over and fails. Flow is something that is innate to the song. And flow holds at its root an incessant movement, a reforming displacement, an eternal slippage, a bubbling friction being dragged away from where it was previously remembered. The journey of the song could only mean the drifting waves that undercut the shoreline to carry it off. Am I to think of you as a song slipping away from the root harbored deep in the throat? No oysterhood, no cries, I know the song always riles the bottom of the root.
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Debasis Mukhopadhyay lives and writes in Montreal, Canada. His poems have appeared in publications in the USA & UK including The Curly Mind, I am not a silent poet, With Painted Words, Yellow Chair Review, Thirteen Myna Birds, Of/With, Silver Birch Press, The Bitchin’ Kitsch, Foliate Oak, Eunoia Review, Snapping Twig, Fragments of Chiaroscuro, among others. Follow him at https://debasismukhopadhyay.wordpress.com/ or @dbasis_m on Twitter.
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Exquisite Debasis. Read aloud or from the page, works equally well. One of your best I think.
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Honored Talia, really. I know you are very familiar with my work. Coming from you! I now really feel, I did something!
Thanks once again for your kind words.
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Indeed you did. I can be extremely picky at times.
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Thanks very much for the encouragement. It works.
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P.s I’ve nicked a line from one of your poems and made it my own. It now reads as; Soft evening. You curl into a contralto of ribs. Is that okay, or will you take a gun and shoot me. I was going to say put a cap in my ass, but you sir, are not a gangster.
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Poetry belongs to everybody, do whatever you want to do with it. Happy that my words are knowing their metamorphosis. Cheers Talia.
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Thanks Debasis. Most Kind and appreciated.
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This is so amazing how our words fly away from ourselves and take root into those others are thinking. These words of Juan Ramon Jimenez took root in me since ages :” Roots and wings. Let the wing grow roots and the roots fly.” I perhaps remembered them when I wrote the above piece.
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